The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/06
I've seen this somewhere before - a cute story.
05/20/06
If this idea has been told in a story, before, I think you have done a creative retelling of it! It does illustrate the challenge topic for the week. You do write well, with a flair for words. God bless you!
05/22/06
LOL. I did know the story, but I liked the way you told it. Well done.
05/23/06
When you re-tell a familiar joke, you risk losing your audience, which is why I suspect that you have few-ish comments. You have really good writing skills, so if you branch out into unfamiliar territory, you'll get more of a readership. Keep writing!