The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/06
Interesting take on Job's story. Nicely done, kept me reading, and held my interest. Good amount of dialogue :)
Yes, I agree, creative take on the story of Job!
ABSOLUTELY GREAT! I'm sorry I don't think you have been given near the credit you deserve in the above comments.I see a superb story line, written in classic C.S.Lewis style...and unless I missed something, I see perfect spelling, grammar, and scentence structure.If we are serious about this craft these are issues that count...not just great ideas.Congratulations on a very fine piece of Christian literature...I'm in here too,but hope you win!
05/20/06
You certainly have a flair for words. This is excellent writing, and you are definitely destined for higher levels, as this is creatively and technically flawless, as I see it. God bless your work!
I agree with everyone. It kept my interest all the way through. Good job. You have my nomination for a winner
05/22/06
Very well written. A strong beginning, and end, and the middle was good too! Well done.
05/23/06
This is superb!
05/24/06
A little work on punctuation, structure, and tenses and you have a valuable piece. Thanks for posting - keep working.
Congrats on your win...well deserved! This was an awesome read. If you wrote a novel I would buy it. Keep up the awesome work.

Blessings!
Trina
05/25/06
You're a talented storyteller, deserving of your place. Congrats on the win!
Cristy, I just noticed you won 7th in Editors Choice as well as your 1st place win in Beginners. A beginner won an Editors Choice...this is simply awesome. Keep up the great work. Oh and I've added you to my favorites.

Trina
05/25/06
I loved this story! You gave us a peek behind the scenes of spiritual warfare. Very creative. Reminds me of some of Frank Peretti's and Ted Dekker's works. Excellent!
05/25/06
I'm delighted to see your name up in lights with your winning entry! Congratulations and God bless you with all His best!
05/25/06
This is truly a magnificent job!! You deserve all the praise for this piece. Again congratulations!!!