The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice testimony. Watch spelling - lose instead of loose, and sight instead of site
i enjoyed it all, but for me the gem was the way you defined propserity using the 5 senses. Cleverly done - I'd be inclined to expand that part a bit, and make it the whole article. Well done
I agree that the middle section here is amazing, and I don't think anyone else took quite that approach. You perhaps used the word "prosperity" too many times--work on word choice and sentence structure, and your writing will go far.