The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/06
Nicely written, good piece. Call me greedy, but I want MORE! I have lots of questions (and that's OK, because sometimed it's good to leave the reader with questions) but somehow I feel we could have had more. Good work.
05/23/06
Wonderfully wrought! Can't believe you are in "beginner" category! : )
Keep up great work! Be Blessed, indeed; CHER
05/24/06
Beautifully written! I suspect that you don't have more comments because this block of text looks difficult to read, without spaces. If you're typing in Word, don't indent (the FaithWriters gnomes will erase the indents). Just single space in block paragraphs, with double spaces between them.

Now that that's out of the way--I hope you enter many, many more challenges--this is wonderful writing, very atmospheric and personal.
05/25/06
Beautifully written, Patty. I felt as if I was right there in His Presence. Keep up the good work and God bless.