The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/06
I can relate to this! Nicely done, good flow, and a nice sound when read aloud. :)
Wonderfully written
05/21/06
Good poem - rhyme, meter, and message. Well done.
05/21/06
Thank you all for your comments, I appreciate it.
05/23/06
Good poem, sounds like you
were one of the blessed children of this world.
great job with this poem. Flowed wonderfully with a great message.
05/23/06
Right on topic. Solid message. Well done.
05/24/06
Meter issues in the last stanza but otherwise a very interesting and well done poem.
05/24/06
I like this! It may not break any original ground, but it's got a great lilt and meter, and the rhymes are spot-on. Good job!