The Official Writing Challenge
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Your story was short and sweet. It was so warming. I would have named it Grannie Annie, but that's just me. Wonderful! Keep up the great writing!
05/21/06
Sounds like you truly appreciate the gift of like and the joy it can bring. Good job.
05/21/06
Sweetly written. Try to space the paragraphs a little for readbility. Good work.
05/24/06
This is very good! No one else took quite this approach, and your originality is appreciated. That's why I'd omit the last sentence, I think--it's too close to the familiar saying "love makes the world go 'round" and doesn't live up to the sparkle of the rest of the piece.
Just cruising old challenges. I have to agree with this one. I sometimes wonder if we should rework some of these old ideas and make them into articles. This one could really be a blessing if expounded on. By the way, I'm a great-granny too.