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05/18/06
This sounds like a good beginning for a devotional.
05/21/06
Good message. I liked the way you started. I think you should have expanded your comments a bit - at times there was as much of the Bible as there was of you. GOod work though.
I agree this would make a good devotional. You do need to add a little more of your words, however. The beginning was very creative.
05/24/06
A study this short could maybe just take one of the Scriptures and use that as your basis? Then you'd have the space to include anecdotes, examples, life experiences, etc. Thank you for the time you must have taken to develop this.