The Official Writing Challenge
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05/20/06
Well you certainly stirred my curiosity with this piece! I've read it a couple of times, and am still a little puzzled by it. SOme interesting points, though. I wonder how it would be if you concentrated on one of them - the optomotrist, for instance, or Christian greenies (which I thought initially wer something to do with ecology!). THank you for sharing.
This was certainly the most different of anything I've read thus far.

The first half was confusing and difficult to follow. The second half had a good theme. Pay close attention to the punctuation.
05/24/06
Your title is very creative! A bit more focus will help this piece to find a greater readership.