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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Prosperity (05/11/06)

TITLE: The Lord Will Pave A Way For You
By Robbie Joseph
05/12/06


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The Lord will pave a way for you
He'll be in everything you do
In your darkest days he's there
Removing all of your fears

See things always spiritually
For you shall speak a thing and it shall be
The Lord has given you this power
So make those demons shake and cower

In life's troubled seas
Stand and continue to believe
For the Lord won't allow you to drown
He'll step in and turn things around

So put all your trust his way
He'll arrive without delay
Continue to yield to him
For it's you he's faithfully shielding

Rejoice in this crucial fact
God has surely got your back
No weapon can cause you any harm
You never have a reason to be alarmed

Your foundation is built upon the rock
The door to your destiny he'll unlock
He's your Father and mentor to
He'll always come through for you


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Virginia Gorg05/18/06
This is nice. Second last line should be "and mentor too." Flow is a little rough (at least to me), but I like the message you have given. Thanks.
Helen Paynter05/20/06
Great message. I liked: 'The Lord has given you this power
So make those demons shake and cower'. Try to tighten your meter a little, as you are structuring it as a metered poem. Your faith shines through this piece.
Jan Ackerson 05/24/06
Here's a suggestion for working on meter--count the syllables in each line, and see that there is a pattern. It doesn't have to be the same number per line (8, 8, 8, 8 for example)--as long as the pattern is consistent (a common one is 8, 6, 8, 6).