The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/06
Nice testimony to a long, God-centered marriage. Watch use of plurals (castles, not castle's). Overall this is a nice read.
Wonderful! I wish we could all be like your family. So many of us have had disfunctional families,(not to say God can't work through that) but what we all want is a family like yours. Great presentation. Keep telling your miracles. (Make sure you proof too. The second last line had a few typo's)
Now...enough of that. It's your time to concentrate on the praise. You did a GREAT job! Keep writing.
05/20/06
A really inspiring piece, nicely written. May the blessing go on through the generations.
Certainly a God-given gift. Good job.
05/24/06
I liked your effective use of parallel structure with "you would see..." Be careful of apostrophe usage--you're missing one or two, but you also have a few where they don't belong. A lovely testimony.