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05/12/06
The only comment I can think to make is, this is perfect! Creatively and technically without flaw. In my estimation, this is ready for the publisher!
05/13/06
Awesome! It left me wanting to read more. Y0ur descriptive language puts the reader right into the situation and feel the feelings of the story.
05/15/06
Lovely! Very well written, good solid Biblical message without being heavy-handed about it - one of my favourites at this level. Well done.
05/16/06
This is one of my favorite passsages...I thought of using it in fact. I would never have thought to use this in a story of abuse but it works. You've captured the conflicting emotions well.