The Official Writing Challenge
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05/12/06
The only comment I can think to make is, this is perfect! Creatively and technically without flaw. In my estimation, this is ready for the publisher!
Awesome! It left me wanting to read more. Y0ur descriptive language puts the reader right into the situation and feel the feelings of the story.
05/15/06
Lovely! Very well written, good solid Biblical message without being heavy-handed about it - one of my favourites at this level. Well done.
This is one of my favorite passsages...I thought of using it in fact. I would never have thought to use this in a story of abuse but it works. You've captured the conflicting emotions well.