The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/06
Well done.
05/12/06
Very well done and a strong message attached. :)
05/12/06
VERY GOOD ARTICLE WITH A GREAT MESSAGE. tHANK YOU FOR THE STORY.
05/15/06
Lovely, touching story. One minor comment, and it amy be becasue I'm from the other side of the Atlantic (if so, disregard it) - 'tummy' sounds a little babyish in this context. I'd use abdomen, bump, belly, stomach, etc. Just a thought. Great piece.
05/16/06
Very competantly told story.
05/17/06
Good writing and story line. I love happy endings. Jesus, the Hope of all. Good job!