The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/06
Great message. It helps the reader if you space your paragraphs ith a blank line between them. I'd love to have seen you expand your comments on Joseph and Paul a bit. Stories (Biblical, personal testimony, or fiction) are immensely poerful at putting a message across.
05/15/06
"...it is only when they have to work for, earn or take some responsibility for it that they see the value of what they wanted. Also because it took a lot to get it they take care of it...." Good insight, which I have seen in action. If everything came easy, where WOULD hope be? Thank you.