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Very good story. Hope and faith
in God's power being stronger than the enemy is whatgives us the strength to keep on keeping on.
Good, well written. One picky question - why the black streaks on her face? I'd expect them if she'd been beaten up an thrown on the road...or if she'd had her head up a chimney(!)etc, but I don't think she should hae them here, should she? Well done otherwise, though.
The black streaks were left from the mascara running down with the tears.
Very expressive writing! I purposely remind myself of the true stories I hear on "Unshackled," when I'm tempted to think somebody is a "hopeless case!" It is a thrill to see what God can do. God bless you!
This is good (the black streaks must mean she needs waterproof mascara). Very heartfelt and a reminder that those of us with unsaved ex-spouses should, and must, pray for them. Thank you.