The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/06
Well done, and thank you for teaching me a new word - farfengartle, eh?
05/12/06
Good job. I enjoyed the story and the truth in it. Loved the title, caught my attention. Blessings, Joyce
05/15/06
Ingenious, and nicely written. Well done.
05/15/06
“Out of hope. Out of faith. Out of the church.”

Because Janet knew Carla so well, she asked with loving sarcasm, “So, then. Where will you go?”

I LOVE this part--you even made me chuckle! We all might have that momentary delusion that we want "OUT!" But, where is "out?" You are addressing an important topic, here. God bless you!
This is excellent. Are you sure you should be in Beginners? Great story.