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Topic: Hope (05/04/06)
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TITLE: Sunrise of Hope | Previous Challenge Entry
By MIRIAM JACOB
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like the sunrise over a
snow-capped mountain peak,
reaching up to the skies.
Hope gives us gladness
from dawn to dusk,
flooding our souls with
heaven's sweetest music.
Hope assures us of a
rousing victory over defeat,
of a glorious certainty
that the best is yet to come.
Hope opens our eyes
to the beauty of life
and the tranquil walk of faith.
Hope makes us aware
of a God of compassion and kindness,
who touches our wintry despair
with His amazing love.
In the midst of life's stormy seas,
we will have perfect peace,
if Christ is our Captain,
our hope and our guide.
Ring the joy bells of life
as we fly on the wings of hope,
with Christ as our Pilot.
Enjoy the glorious sunrise
of hope over the mountains of life.
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I do wish the ending was a little different, using a different image than one you had already used.
I particularly liked "flooding our souls with heaven's sweetest music", and "...who touches our wintry despair with His amazing love"
Thanks for writing this, keep entering! Looking forward to reading more of your work.
So... maybe use a different image in the beginning instead...?
I'm so happy Valora alerted us to find this beautiful poem you wrote for her. Thank you for your encouraging words. God bless your writing!