The Official Writing Challenge
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05/13/06
Some nice ides here - I'd urge you to have the confidence to give yourself a little more voice and expand them.
05/14/06
I am sorry, but this piece is rather thought provoking, but in a negitive way. There are several good points made but nothing runs together. As thought your thoughts upon writing it were just seeking more question to fill the page. If you had taking just a few of the points and built upon them it would have flowed better. Again I am sorry, but it is how it came across.