The Official Writing Challenge
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05/13/06
Great message, but we really need more. All the world loves a story. Give us examples! Tell us a story that show us these truths! Get your message out there powerfully, becasue it is so worth telling.
I'd definitely like to see this expounded upon. Watch your homonyms (there, their). Otherwise this is a good start!
05/13/06
Enjoyed reading your thoughts on hope, I agree, I would have liked a little more in length. Keep writing, good job.
There is some good stuff in here. Watch using the same word too often. This is pretty good.