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05/11/06
A very good analogy. I like your "take" on the theme. Well done.
05/12/06
I enjoyed your work, but please do remembering that formatting often helps make the piece easier and more enjoyable to read.
05/13/06
Some really creative thoughts in this, and nicely written.
05/13/06
Almost poetic with a wonderful analogy built in. This piece is strong and the writer has great potential. Keep at it! You've worlds to conquor!
05/14/06
Very good parallel. Sweet prose!
This is done very well. I like the way you compared the newborn and his growth to hope. Good analogy.
What a beautiful account of hope and love. Incredibly written. You have much potential and I look forward to seeing some more of your work! Keep at it!