The Official Writing Challenge
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05/13/06
Great Bilical truths in this, thank you.
I see a great piece in the works here. Put a space between each sentence and watch your spelling. You definitely have the beginnings of a good piece.
This is a good message. Watch your punctuation and spelling. With a little work you could make this into a nice piece.
05/17/06
I can only echo what the others have said and add: You have the beginnings of a good article here. Spread your thoughts out. Make each new one into a paragraph of its own and read it aloud to make sure that it makes sense. Arrange each paragraph so that it builds on the one you have just written. Add short stories or anecdotes to illustrate/clarify your major points. Keep writing!