The Official Writing Challenge
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That's a great expression, not only of hope, but of just plain perseverance. Nice.
Nicely done. Good message, like the humour, and the rhymes were unforced. Just in one or two places the meter tripped me up, but I think there's a lot of talent here.
This was a joy to read. There was only one place that I saw that tripped me, but over all excellent.
Great work! I love the way you encourage the reader to find a quiet place within themselves when the going gets tough. Last line had me chuckling! This line: 'Thereís lots of things Iíd like to do Iíll never do again' doesn't quite makes sense to me, though. Maybe: Thereís lots of things Iíd like to do; or never do again... Anyway, I enjoyed it!