The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/06
That's a great expression, not only of hope, but of just plain perseverance. Nice.
05/13/06
Nicely done. Good message, like the humour, and the rhymes were unforced. Just in one or two places the meter tripped me up, but I think there's a lot of talent here.
This was a joy to read. There was only one place that I saw that tripped me, but over all excellent.
05/17/06
Great work! I love the way you encourage the reader to find a quiet place within themselves when the going gets tough. Last line had me chuckling! This line: 'Thereís lots of things Iíd like to do Iíll never do again' doesn't quite makes sense to me, though. Maybe: Thereís lots of things Iíd like to do; or never do again... Anyway, I enjoyed it!