The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/06
Good job here. Easy to read with a solid strong message of hope.
05/13/06
Great message - very Biblical. I'd shy clear of starting with a dictionary definition - can be a little off-putting. Good writing.
You made some excellent points and you write clearly. However, you want to create interest by illustrating your message creatively. It is okay to teach and this is sound teaching, but you want to liven it up with examples, humor, drama. Do avoid the dictionary, except as inspiration.
05/15/06
Love your devotional of hope combined with faith. Thanks for blessing me with this message of hope.
05/16/06
One of the few devotionals I have read that makes the distinction between the types of hope clear. Logically thought out and presented. Well done.