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The Home for Christian Writers! The Official Writing Challenge BACK TO CHALLENGE MAIN INSTRUCTIONS how it works submission rules guidelines for choosing a level ENTRIES submit your entry read current entries read past entries challenge winners Our Daily Devotional HERE Place it on your site or receive it daily by email. TRUST JESUS TODAY Share Tweet how it works   Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner) Topic: Hope (05/04/06) TITLE: STOP....to consider..... By 05/04/06  LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE  SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT  ADD TO MY FAVORITES Hit the wall and not the child Take a deep breath, don’t get riled You were once an infant too Carers thought the world of you You grew up into your teens Anger surfaced, violent scenes Break the circle don’t be tethered Or you find the family severed Rid the land of Child Abuse Banish every false excuse See them grow up in delight Childhood valued. Get it right. PREVIOUS ENTRY | NEXT ENTRY SUBMIT YOUR ENTRY FOR THIS WEEK'S CHALLENGE The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com. If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be right now. CLICK HERE JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel. This article has been read 532 times Member Comments Member Date Helen Paynter 05/13/06 Sweet poem with a great message. You have a good ear for rhyme and meter. Would have liked a little more. Brandi Roberts 05/13/06 Definitely short and sweet, I liked your choice of words. Well done. Dr. Sharon Schuetz 05/13/06 Well done. The message, the rhyme, and the rhythm, were all good. It was way too short though. Val Clark 05/16/06 This is excellent work and a lovely surprise to read at this level! Clear, precise and impassioned without being sentimental. No forced or over used rhymes consistent rhythm. Well done. A poem is as long as a poem need to be, unless it's a FW challenge entry. :-) rhyme unintentional. Rita Garcia 05/16/06 Writing from the heart is a pleasure to read. Keep writing. Patricia Charlton 05/17/06 It is short and to the point. However, I was looking for a longer piece. The last line in the first grouping confused me. "Carers", did you meet careers? You have great rythmn in this piece. Keep writing!

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