The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/06
Good writing! You held back information that kept me reading, trying to figure out if Ean were recuperating in a wheelchair, and couldn't go sailing? I'm glad I was off on the wrong track. This is the kind of writing I like.
05/09/06
Neat way to propose - I didn't guess it until the end. Good job of writing.
05/09/06
Thank you for the good ending. I really emjoyed your story. Nice, smooth writing. Easy to read, follow and get involved with.