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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Love (04/27/06)

TITLE: I will love you for infinity
By
05/03/06


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I miss our talks and the way you laugh
But most of all I miss the Love we had

My heart hurts for myself
Because the one and only love
I ever prayed about was you

You are the love I always wanted
The love I always dreamed about
I will never find some one
I will ever love as you
You are my heart, my soul, and I belong to you

I know you felt it
you told me so
those three little words
made my heart soar
for no one had ever looked
at me the way you did

you seen more than beauty
you seen within
I will never show that
part of my heart to anyone else
because the one I showed
It to, well it failed


Now I am here with a broken heart
Wondering if I will ever get
to be a part
I mean a part of your life again

I miss you, I love you, and it is raining outside
those are my tears that this world sees
my tears are every where and so hard to hide


With all my heart, soul, body, and mind
I will Love you for Infinity and beyond time


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Edy T Johnson 05/08/06
Very expressive of a broken heart, that's for sure. I liked the connection between the rain and the tears of the narrator. One grammatical correction: "seen" should be "saw." ["You saw more than beauty...."]