The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/06
This is a satisfying read, for the most part. Just one question from the first paragraph sort of dangled unanswered. A good hook to keep your reader, but I wondered why the dad had said this daughter's wedding was something "that I had always said that I wouldn’t do." Maybe he was "just kidding!" but that didn't come through, either. Good writing, nonetheless!
05/09/06
Why would a father not want to walk his daughter down the aisle? But I like this story, as if a dad was writing in his diary. Nice work.
I'm just "cruising" around to different challenge articles. I really liked this. So emotional.