The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/06
Thanks for sharing a message on trusting in love even at the risk of experiencing pain. One suggestion would be to divide the third paragraph into smaller paragraphs. God bless.
05/08/06
Ooh! I love the title--the reader wants to read, to open that box. Good "turmoil" writing, as the woman explores her hopes and fears, trying to reach the right conclusion. And, a happy ending. You've got all the ingredients and you whipped it up deliciously.
05/09/06
Very well done, easy to read, and sounds like a true story.