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05/06/06
Excellent story. Very touching. it made me think of my three when they were born.
05/08/06
You sure captured the emotion well. I remember the first time I witnessed the miracle of birth as a student nurse, same overwhelming sense of wonder at our awesome God and His marvelous creation! Good writing---I was back in uniform in the delivery room with you!
05/09/06
A good reflection on the birth of a child. But just wait until you see your first grandchild being born. Different intensity of love. This is good writing - easy to read - flows well - gives good emotions.