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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Love (04/27/06)

TITLE: MY DEARLY BELOVED
By oguegbu ijeoma
05/03/06


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There i was,
Standing in the middle of a beautiful garden
With all kinds of flowers one can imagine
Beside it was a deep blue sea
I was dressed in a pure white silk gown
With beads round it's colar also with
my white two-paced shoe, like one
never worn before.
I was dressed like a queen, as the rose of sharon
With smells like of myrrh and frankincense.
Anyone who stare at me would place a smile;
I was the bride with red the coloured roses in my hands
I await my groom, ready to be taken to the altar.
Knowing everything was in place
ahhhh... i sighed in relieve and comfort.
But i was still searching for my beloved
Where is prince, my groom?
My knight in shinning armour
My gentle dove, my lovely orchard
In my desperate search
A voice double-crossed me
Here is he whom you are looking for
Pointing to his right hand side
without caring whose voice it was
I turned uncontrollable
Staring at him.
There he was hung on a cross
stripped off his clothes.
Blood gushing from his head, hands and sides
staring unconsciously at him
my dearly beloved, I altered .
Then he opened his eyes and said
What a tragedy to die unloved.
And i woke up.
Was it a dream, trance or vission.


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Edy T Johnson 05/08/06
Your words paint a fascinating picture. Some spell-checking needed, but otherwise a captivating and creative bit of writing.