The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a special story. The long sentence of paragraph two was a little hard to get through, but overall I enjoyed this.
05/08/06
Great job! It is an interesting concept that she who doesn't know the Lord would have faith while the believers did not. I would have like to have her conversion a little more nailed down and it needs to be tighter but it is a great take on the topic.
05/08/06
A tender and moving story. Watch out for run-on sentences and sentence fragments, and keep on writing! This was lovely.
05/09/06
A good story of how God can reach anyone, believers or not. Well done.
You expressed your character's emotions well. I agree about the long sentences. But overall a great job.