The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/06
You obviously have good writing ability; I think you would have greater impact on your readers if you were to put these words in the mouth of characters in a story. That way, readers would be drawn in, involved IN the drama, rather than being mere spectators. Dostoyevsky is a good writer's model. How he preached through his characters! Remember, Jesus even taught in Parables---memorable stuff!
05/09/06
This is good - have you considered putting it into a poetry style? Easy read and a good devotional, perhaps.