The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/06
Some refinement needed, but this reads in the way of a devotional. Nice work.
05/09/06
You obviously have good writing ability. This is just a suggestion: I think your writing would have the most impact on your readers if you were to put these words in the mouth of characters in a story. That way, readers would be drawn in, involved IN the drama, rather than being mere spectators. Dostoyevsky is a good writer's model. How he preached through his characters! Remember, even Jesus taught in Parables---It makes for more memorable reading!