The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/06
You say you are not a good writer, but I see potential. Read a lot and write a lot and you'll see improvements in grammar etc. You have a good message - Bibles not weapons - I agree that's what children should carry.
05/09/06
Great message - could be a bit longer perhaps? If you tighten up a bit of grammar there is real potential here. I particularly like the last 2 sentences.
05/09/06
Oh! You left us with a powerful punch line at the end. That is very good!
To someone with a burning desire to communicate who doesn't think of him/herself as a good writer, you may be surprised! Write what is on your heart, stories from your life that carry a message that God can use to help others. That is the creative gift. The rest can be developed. Think of an opera singer. God gave her the voice, but she needed training and coaching to make use of the gift. Ditto for writers! Be encouraged and keep writing!
05/09/06
p.s. If you'd like more ideas for your writing, go to:
http://www.faithwriters.com/article-details.php?id=43086
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