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I could feel her doubts and pain, the fear of facing up to her life. I liked the last lines too, it seemed to end the story just right!
03/02/05
Outstanding. This one's a gem.
I wanted to cry after I finished this - it was wonderful. Thank you for sharing.
03/12/05
Amber, what a beautiful story! Your entries are better each time. Keep growing!
04/04/06
This is so realistic. I remember when my then 17-year old daughter told me she was pregnant . . . but we never parted and we are still quite close. I have God to thank for that.