The Official Writing Challenge
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Great solution to the problem. Good job.
Nice story, and you SHOWED Mrs. Hinkle to be a very intuitive person instead of simply saying she was. Well-written, but seems a bit abrupt at the end. What if you summed it up with a paragraph about the emotional impact on Anna from Anna's point of view? Maybe with a response from the one she passes the heart to.
I thought ending it where you did was perfect. You left us wanting more, but you gave us enough information that we could "finish" the story in our mind to our own satisfaction. Of course, if you were to begin Chapter 2, then the little girl's point of view could be used. Very sweet story! Thank you!