The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/06
Is this how Valentine's Day really began? Great imagination if it isn't! Nicely done. I got sidetracked for a second with this: "Fewer unattached young men meant a larger army". More unattached or Fewer attached? But great job.
05/08/06
Good job with building the suspense, and with staying historically accurate.
05/08/06
Great account! You did a super job of writing. I enjoyed reading this all the way through.
05/09/06
A well spun tale of historical basis. Thanks for posting.
Excellent job. I shared their emotion as they ran. Good story.
05/10/06
What a creative take on the topic! It is good to remember Valentine for the true beauty of what he did in his life instead of candy hearts and flowers