The Official Writing Challenge
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What? No comments on this piece. This is a great article. It is believable and convicting. A WINNER!
05/05/06
I had Goose Bumps at the end. I only get those when I feel the spirit in things. Well Done. Keep on writing!!
Great story! Keep writing...Doreen
05/09/06
Very well done. I like the way God's voice was heard. A few missing quotation marks, but overall a good piece.
05/10/06
WOW! I read the second part as tears washed down my face. I love the way God spoke to him gently the first time, and a little more forcefully the second time. I do believe it is easy to ignore His quiet still voice. Great entry, winner written all over it.
05/10/06
Wow! A great message.
05/10/06
Only problem with starting this well is you have to work harder next time. Nice job. Think about affirmations (he said etc. eliminate if possible). Great beginnings.