The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/06
I see some good writing here and a hopeful topic. Please leave white space between paragraphs for easier reading. I like the line "let God create a masterpiece."
This is a good message. You need to watch your sentence structure and as already pointed out separate your paragraphs. It looks like you need to also break some of this into more paragraphs for easier reading. I also liked the concept of God making a master piece of your life. Good job.