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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Love (04/27/06)

TITLE: God's Heart
By Jennifer Wortham
04/27/06


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Every time a baby giggles a little piece of Gods heart is realized

A babyís first step is bigger than all of us realize

We are children of God and he created us

God smiles every time

Itís beyond a smile itís pure concentrated love seeping from the
Innocence, of Love

Godís qualities
Radiate through each new born baby

Each birth is a miracle
Each giggle is a blessing
Each breath is Godís mercy

If each snowflake is unique then how unique can we be

What difference can we make
If God cared enough to make each snowflake unique

Even though we canít see the difference from the naked eye
Yet it was still important to God to create the unique snowflake

Imagine how each of us means to him
Imagine how important we are to him

Weather we know it or can see it or not
We all are
Miracles

Yet sometimes

The rain and the wind tare through everything

Destroying everything that comes in itís path

We are yet so small compared to the power of the storm

We think we are so important
We think that we control everything

But we really control
Nothing

We are all but at Godís mercy with every breath we take

Donít take God for granted

Or

Be afraid
Be terrified

To be humble is to survive


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Connie Husby05/05/06
This poem started off so gently and lovely and pure. However, I had a hard time following it, not sure if it just didn't flow or had too many ideas in it. You need to keep doing this, because I believe sooner or later your poetry will all come together and flow as it should. May you be blessed as you are inspired by the Holy Spirit to write.
Doreen Hammond05/06/06
I agree, I think your overall writing is good, but it seems fragmented and thoughts not quite finished. keep writing!