The Official Writing Challenge
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This poem started off so gently and lovely and pure. However, I had a hard time following it, not sure if it just didn't flow or had too many ideas in it. You need to keep doing this, because I believe sooner or later your poetry will all come together and flow as it should. May you be blessed as you are inspired by the Holy Spirit to write.
I agree, I think your overall writing is good, but it seems fragmented and thoughts not quite finished. keep writing!