The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/06
I enjoyed your piece. I see you dedicated it to your husband of 8 years. My wife and I have been married 28 years and I saw our marriage in your poetry. It hasn't all been one big, happy clam-bake but in the end, the Lord has blessed, and I am a very lucky guy to have the wife he has given me.
05/05/06
Very nicely done. A couple of minor things: "Comes" should be "come" and "your" should be you're" but these are little fixes that don't take away from the lovely sentiment and good verse. Good job.