The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/05
Nice poem. I would consider leaving a space between each stanza, to give the reader a chance to take in that specific thought before moving on to the next. Thank you for sharing. God bless,
Cheri
I thought about this poem today. I lost my cell phone and just felt like nothing was going right. then I thought about this poem and how I had the chance to have a willing spirit and that God would work out the details if I just let the heartache go.
You hit the nail on the head. Other than the formatting issue that was already commented on, it was a great read. Thanks for writing.