The Official Writing Challenge
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04/27/06
You write well, luring the reader with just enough information, but hinting there's more (so "keep reading!"). So, you hooked me! This is a good story of a crisis, with just the right words from the Pastor to lend support and give meaning to this family's experience. Good job!
05/02/06
Wow! This is a great story. It's a bit difficult to read (too spaced out), but the message of God is powerful. :)