The Official Writing Challenge
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04/30/06
This reads at times like a narrative, and at times like a devotional. It might be more effective if that were clarified. A wonderful testimony of God's help through difficult times.
05/01/06
Strong testimony, although I stumbled at the end on your reference to "God or our highter power". GLad you came through with his help/