The Official Writing Challenge
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04/30/06
A sad story, told with tenderness and love. Consider expanding on this; I think your readers would like to know more about your granddaughter's circumstances, and specific instances of your raising her.
05/01/06
Nice job. I'd have liked a little more.
05/02/06
Grammatical and misspelled words detract from the overall message of a grandparent's love. Seems incomplete - I want more detail. :)