The Official Writing Challenge
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04/27/06
Help us all Lord to let go and to trust in You.
Nice piece. Thanks.
Nice twist on the Bible story. Not mentioning Moses until halfway through the piece was clever.

Maybe you should try writing it in the first person--it would be even more powerful, I think.

Good work.
We all need to let go and let God. This is a winner in my books.