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To have SUCH inner strength!Very good imagery to depict what he must have been feeling. Good Job!
The title captured me right away (and that is important)
This is a piece with great imagery but I felt that a third person perspective would have made it stronger. It is extremely difficult to write first person and have the reader really feel the depth of the event. It is a great take on the topic word. Very creative
I came looking, from the message boards, to get acquainted with who you are, and discovered this. What powerful writing! Unlike the above comment, I've always thought FIRST person, not third, was the person of choice to convey the depth of emotion you so beautifully portray, here, in your writing. I wouldn't change a thing. I like your God-given talent and I will have to keep an eye on you :)