The Official Writing Challenge
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Finally something that made me WANT to read it. My eyes didn't leave the page. Wonderful story!
Leaves me with tears. What strength. Excellent writing.
04/28/06
Very well written, good handling of POV which is a big problem for many, and great story. Understood and enjoyed it all!
05/02/06
A reminder that often hinderences get in the Lord's way. Nicely written with a few grammatical errors (8-yr-old should be spelled out).