The Official Writing Challenge
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You are a good writer, a gripping story teller. Thanks for sharing.
Very entertaining and gripping story. I read through it quickly wanting to find out what happened with Travis. Effective writing.

I LOVE your last line. I always like it when a story can end with a punch. Using a question is one of my favorite methods. Nicely done.
Very well written and should make us examine our own roots for depth. thank you.
Browsing old challenges again. This is good. Very good. It tells a deep truth.