The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/06
You are a good writer, a gripping story teller. Thanks for sharing.
Very entertaining and gripping story. I read through it quickly wanting to find out what happened with Travis. Effective writing.

I LOVE your last line. I always like it when a story can end with a punch. Using a question is one of my favorite methods. Nicely done.
05/02/06
Very well written and should make us examine our own roots for depth. thank you.
Browsing old challenges again. This is good. Very good. It tells a deep truth.