The Official Writing Challenge
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Very well written!! What a personal addition to a familar Bible story. Only suggestion is maybe expand a little more specifially on how this ties into the theme.
I enjoyed the expansion of a familiar story. Your perspective was great.
First of all, I loved the story; however, not strong on topic. One small typo, but otherwise well written. Would be helpful to have a footnote with Scripture Referenced for those who are not familiar with this Bible Story. Very creative and kept the Reader's interest throughout. Good job.
Excellent take on this wonderful story. I like how you created a background that gave a "might-have-been-this way" meaning to what Jesus said. Good job.
I like your writing. Your use of the language is strong but not over done. Good job.