The Official Writing Challenge
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This is really good. You drew a great word picture.
04/29/06
Beatiful story. I wondered if you meant "eliminated" in one place and if you meant "lose" instead of "loose" in another...but all in all it was a fascinating read! I liked it.
05/01/06
Good job, well written. Love the message woven throughout.